Sunday, March 13, 2011

Moon

Moon
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As you borrow your light
from sister sun
who tries to warm you.
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You need the darkest night
to let moonbeams run,
to whom is beneath you.
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My path is bright
and you the kite,
to guide me,,,
to where my love will find me.
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written for Theme Thursday : http://themethursday.blogspot.com/

5 comments:

J Cosmo Newbery said...

"And you the kite to guide me" Nice image.

Doctor FTSE said...

You have used the image imaginatively.
(You have a typo in line 6. "Beneat" for "Beneath", I think?)

Foxies Lair said...

Thank you Cosmo and Doctor for the nice comment.
I corrected the typo, Doctor,my thanks for seeing it. My native tongue is Flemish (I call that a warmer sort of Dutch) and I am very cautious to write without faults. One slipped in and I wouldn't forgive myself if it would have stayed there; an eyesore to me. That is why I am grateful this gets pointed out.
Why I write in English? The images and words come to me in English so maybe I was, in a previous life,,,who knows.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

fun word play, love your imagination here.
smiles.

Rogue said...

Beautifully done Magda!